The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/13
You did a marvelous job with this. I truly enjoyed your take and making it come to life.

God bless~
I liked this a lot. I liked the way you focused on the garment instead of his blindness and that he gave up something precious to receive the blessings of Christ. Great job.
You have crafted a very fine story that was delightful to read. The word "viral" caught my attention and I do not think it is the word you meant to use. The ending was fitting and satisfying. Well done.
I love this. It puts a new perspective on this story. I have only one "ouch": did you intend "viral" to really mean "virile"? Either way, how delightfully written!
Congratulations on ranking 29 overall!