The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh boy, I was so hoping for a happy ending! Thank you for the victorious ending, because even though life isn't always happy, we can have victory. I liked the realistic dialogue. Well written story.
02/23/13
I loved this entire piece, and was happy with the ending as well! God bless~
02/24/13
Excellent work, in taking us through your characters' inner thoughts and dialogue. I was also expecting a happy ending, but the tragedy struck without warning - as it too often does.
I also love how you wrapped it up even in the pain.
Congratulations on ranking 21 overall!