The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/13
Awww. I really enjoyed this read. It touched my heart.

Thank you. God bless~
Awww... sweet, heartfelt story. Thanks for writing.
This story is tremendously appealing and I enjoyed reading it. With a little tweaking,I think it has potential to be a powerful story. For example, you wrote "...received a word", when "received word" or even "learned", would make the reading flow smoother. The ending left a good feeling. Well done.
02/28/13
God bless~
Congratulations on placing fifth in your level and for ranking 24 overall!
02/28/13
That was supposed to say
Congrats and God bless~
Congratulations! May God bless you richly . . .