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02/22/13
A very clever approach to the inner thinking of the Philippian jailor. Good word pictures to feed our imagination. Small edit point - a sheaf is a small bundle of wheat: a sheath is what holds a knife or sword. (I'm sorry to raise such a swordid detail.:-( )
02/22/13
Great job presenting this Bible story from the perspective of the jailer. God truly works in some strange ways sometimes to bring people the truthÖthis is what it must have taken for the jailer and his familyís eyes to have been opened! And you know Paul and Silas had to have as shocked and awed as the rest, the way God worked this miracle! Enjoyable read! Well done!
02/23/13
An exciting and enjoyable piece. I couldn't stop reading it. THanks.
God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall!
03/02/13
Great story, Vonnie. I really enjoyed your creative take on this Biblical account. Congratulations on your placement of 11th over all.