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02/23/13
Beautiful poem! God bless~
I enjoyed your poem. I liked this line: "Repent, be cleansed, from every sin
as hallowed vessels, set apart,
oh let revival start, within
our poor, Laodicean hearts."
I think this poem is beautiful. You painted vivid pictures for my mind. It touches my heart and I'm sure it will reach many others as well. Good job.
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03/01/13
This is an amazing poem with a strong and powerful message from Scripture. You have been able to deeply portray chastisement, heart felt prayer of repentance, the hope of salvation, and much more. The third truthful verse hits hard, the fourth is an echoing prayer from many hearts, the sixth amazing grace! Thankyou so much for this Deb.
You have an amazing gift... I love the flow of this and the message is so crucial is this watered-down-world we live in. This piece reminds me of a favorite convicting song of mine written by a pop artist from the 70's who went home to be with the Lord in 1982. His name is Keith Green and the song is "My Eyes are Dry." It is on Youtube and I think you will be blessed by it as I was in reading this poem. Thank you for sharing your gift.