The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/13
Wow - this was excellent writing and quite the story. There are so many young people going through issues, and athletes are particularly subject to "pranks and talk." This held my attention and brought forth a great message in the end. I enjoyed the intensity and the loyalty the story reflected.

Thanks. God bless~
02/26/13
You've generated a great deal of sympathy for your MC from me. Your ending shines with the wisdom in the key. Great work!
Congratulations on ranking 27th overall!