The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/13
This is a lovely, well-written story with a powerful message!

You had some very nice descriptive sentences such as:
"It’s polished wood surface gleamed and the pristine white keys were as unblemished and perfect as a set of brand new dentures."

I enjoyed reading this very much!
02/23/13
Enjoyed this entire piece. Thank you. God bless~
02/24/13
Very descriptive, with a positive challenge flowing through the whole piece.