The Official Writing Challenge
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Ooooh... I liked this a lot! At first I thought it was a historical writing. The twist into the present took me by surprise. I couldn't stop reading. Great job!
Good job with this entry. Nicely done. God bless~
You did a fabulous job of taking the reader on a journey through the centuries. You were able to build the suspense as you wrote. My history and the Bible can be fuzzy in my brain because of my illness, but you have made me want to grab my Bible and read more about Moses.
Congratulations on placing 8th in your level and for ranking 32 overall!