The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well written. I like the simplicity of the lines, the deep emotion expressed, the victorious ending. Good job!
02/19/13
Just beautiful. God's gift of forgiveness is so amazing, we can't help help but give it to others.
This was so masterful and sensitive! It was so effective the way you used the idea of the note repetitively, even relentlessly, to write to different people, then to yourself, crumpled it all up, wrote your note to Him, and then finished with the book of life, the heavenly note that cancels out all notes.I think we could all feel the pain in some of the lines.Some wonderful lines eg'each mistake I made cracked my porcelain shell'.I think every sixteen year old should be given this to read.
Congratulations on ranking 9th in Masters and 12 overall!