The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/13
Poignant story.
Not sure where it fits into this week's topic.
Love the ending!
02/12/13
Lovely. I appreciate that you didn't make the MC a caricature, as is often done with similar characters.

So minor--toward the end, you used '20' when it would have been better with the word spelled out.

I could relate to this woman, and the final paragraph was luminous.
02/13/13
Such an entertaining read. I really enjoyed this.
God bless~
02/14/13
Uniquely and well written from a POV prayerfully none of us reading this will ever have to endure. Although since human trafficking abounds....
02/14/13
Congratulations!
Keep Winging His Words...
02/16/13
A very different and very original submission. I liked the dialogue, the time period and the ending. Very nice work.
03/03/13
While I did enjoy the read, I wonder how this would have won seeing that it has not as much as mentioned the word staff. I would appreciate an explanation, if anyone would be so inclined..