The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/13
I like how you slipped us into Eunice’s head and thoughts...and good thoughts to get into, wise woman that she is! She undoubtedly wouldn’t approve of you slipping us in there, as I’m sure she’d want her thoughts as well as her speech guarded...but I won’t tell! :) Good women like her are hard to find. This was well written and I really enjoyed the read!
02/11/13
Good development of characters (once I figured out which one was the POV).Perhaps a little more self-description in the first paragraph would have helped. I like the ending.
02/13/13
Such a delightfully entertaining and well written entry.

God bless~
02/16/13
Leola congratulations!

God bless~
02/16/13
I really enjoyed the dialogue going on in Euny's head and her almost immediate self correction when thinking wrong thoughts. Priceless bit of writing my dear!