The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/13
Amen! It is often easier to worry than to pray and trust that God has a plan. I am learning that lessen daily.
02/09/13
Excellent story, and I'm so glad it worked out so well for you. Women so underestimate themselves at that time of life of returning to the work force. I am sure so much in your life had prepared you for that position. Well done.
02/10/13
It never ceases to amaze me how God guides and directs our path and the curry made my mouth water. Well done.
02/12/13
I love the detail that gives this first-person account interest--the chicken curry made my mouth water (until you added the raisins).

I'd suggest that you not begin a story with dialogue. Most publishers don't recommend it.

Good ending--very satisfying and an excellent read all around.

02/13/13
Nicely done. God Bless~
Hi -

This piece much engaged and encouraged. Yes, it has love, hope, comfort and GOD'S results.