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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Staff (01/31/13)

TITLE: The Crook
By vincent lyons
02/05/13


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A day to be remembered in the little village school
When everyone scrubbed up the best, veneration was the rule,
The bishop came with great aplomb and mighty fuss took place
With people tripping over as they tried to please ‘his grace’.

With fervour our headmaster introduced him to us all,
(Strait-laced student body all assembled in the hall)—
Arrayed in bishop’s finery with mitre and with crook
A most imposing figure with a very pompous look.

We bowed our heads in reverence in hushed and silent awe
Before the most important person pupils ever saw;
All hung upon his every word, most eloquent, profound,
From time to time to emphasise he waved his crook around.

Gems glinting in the spotlight coupled with his monotone
My thoughts flew out the window where they’d often tend to roam;
Winged back to bible times and Judah’s sheep who sometimes strayed,
To metaphors which Jesus used—deep truths He thus portrayed.

There, lost in contemplation of the shepherds and their sheep,
The apostles and the elders and the people in their keep,
The only thing the shepherds used to coax and lead and prod—
A simple wooden staff they also called the shepherd’s rod.

This rod was not elaborate, no gold or gems or such
Was rather like the shepherd—so to look at wasn’t much;
‘His grace’ had long concluded while my mind had wandered so
The audience were basking in his lordship’s afterglow.

A question lingers since that night—it’s answer I still seek;
So don’t think I’m being sardonic or worse still, tongue in cheek—
A mystery most pressing—great conundrum I can’t brook—
Can someone please explain it--how the staff became a crook!


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Linda Goergen02/09/13
Descriptive, entertaining, witty and funny...pretty much in that order. Enjoyed the read!
Noel Mitaxa 02/11/13
You're asking US how the bishop's staff became a crook? I thought YOU mitre told us!
But seriously, this was a very warm and enjoyable read. Well done.
Sheldon Bass 02/11/13
A really good piece always leaves us pondering a truth. And this certainly does that.
It is a very enjoyable read and kept me interested all the way through. Nice job.
CD Swanson 02/13/13
So funny! Hahahaha...loved it. Thanks.

God bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 02/14/13
Congratulations on ranking 8th in level four and 13 overall!