The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 329 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/09/13
Wow! If a simple servant girl could be courageous enough to witness to her employer, what is stopping the rest of us? Thanks for the great example.
02/10/13
The title drew me in. Should have known it was evangelical (LOL). Inspiring piece. Might want to watch some slight redundancy.
02/12/13
I LOVED that you left it where you did--with Lucy's intention to act--rather than giving us the actual conversation with her dying employer. You trusted your own strong writing and your intelligent readers to end the story appropriately. This is a great skill to master when you've only got 750 words. Very well done.
02/13/13
Great job with the topic. Thanks. God bless~
Congratulations on your HC and for ranking 24 overall!