The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! If a simple servant girl could be courageous enough to witness to her employer, what is stopping the rest of us? Thanks for the great example.
The title drew me in. Should have known it was evangelical (LOL). Inspiring piece. Might want to watch some slight redundancy.
I LOVED that you left it where you did--with Lucy's intention to act--rather than giving us the actual conversation with her dying employer. You trusted your own strong writing and your intelligent readers to end the story appropriately. This is a great skill to master when you've only got 750 words. Very well done.
Great job with the topic. Thanks. God bless~
Congratulations on your HC and for ranking 24 overall!