The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/13
Great imagery - and a wonderful take on a beloved psalm. Thanks for sharing!
02/12/13
Lovely poetry! Thanks for being transparent enough to tell your story.

Just a few minor tweaks--the use of the word 'trod' at the end of one stanza doesn't really work without a preposition, and 'rebellions' is a possesive noun, so it needs an apostrophe.

Your poetic skills are strong, with excellent imagery. I enjoyed this poem very much.
02/13/13
Beautiful as always. Your style, flow, and words, are glaringly apparent now. Being able to recognize who the person is, is indeed a sign of an excellent writer.

When the reader can ascertain immediately by the content, and flair as to whom the author is...you've arrived!

Fantastic. Thank you!

God bless~