The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/13
What a funny and original scenario. Loved it.
02/12/13
Cute and fun. Enjoyed this piece!
02/12/13
Charming and witty, with an engaging voice.

Be careful not to use apostrophes with plural words, and this would have been just a tad more effective with a more defined conflict and resolution. Very minor flaws in a delightful story.

I especially liked the staff/execution bit at the very end. So much fun!
02/13/13
Adorable, fun and a joy to read. God bless~