The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved your word pictures - like the pillaging hobo - and the energy that you have wrapped around Amanda and her story.
She didn't let the truth stand in the way of her account, which reminded me of the enterprising stall-holder at an Egyptian market; who was selling fragments from the bones of the cattle in Pharaoh's dream!
Very creative and entertaining read! Couldn’t help but love your MC, Amanda. You brought her to life so well—and also, this story helps take a less prominent character of the Bible, Mephibosheth, and brings him to life in a memorable way, in this story within a story. Great job!
Creative and well done for sure! God bless~