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02/11/13
Wow - this is wonderful. Such a great allegory with excellent imagery and lessons. Thanks so much for sharing it!
02/12/13
Beautiful allegory. No critique at all, but I'd like to have seen the "Thwack"s in italics, as that's usually the way onomatopoeia is handled. Wonderful work on this delightful piece.
02/13/13
Wonderful and a delight to read. God bless~