The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/13
I really enjoyed this. Those who work in nursing homes are very special people and often are the Rod and His staff to the residents there.
02/09/13
This was very well done. There have been thousands of stories written on Psalm 23 so I avoided the subject even though it was the first thought that popped into my mind.

I certainly would have written on the subject if I could have been as creative and original with it as you. Excellent job.
02/12/13
I love the creative take on Psalm 23--absolutely delightful.

I only have a slight problem with your premise--that the MC is looking for a cause for the lady's smile. If it only happened when someone whispered in her ear, that's a pretty obvious action and she wouldn't really have to look at other stimuli.

The wordplay at the end was very appealing, and I enjoyed this tender story bery much.
02/13/13
Clever and fresh approach to the topic. God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 10th in level three!