The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/13
Interesting perspective for sure. I found the voice a bit jumpy, and caught a few words here and there that were out of place, but overall, a pretty good entry. Thanks for sharing.
02/12/13
This has a unique voice of the sort not often seen here on FaithWriters--tough, gritty, realistic. Well done.

I did find it a bit jumpy and hard to follow, as if the narrator was assuming that I had certain knowledge that I did not. And the topic was only slightly present.

All in all, unique and creative, an enjoyable read.
02/13/13
WOW - This was different, and unique. I applaud your ability to go in a totally different direction...as this is the antithesis of what we usually see here in the forum.

Well done. God Bless~