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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Repeat (01/24/13)

TITLE: Eternal Dance
By Terry R A Eissfeldt
01/31/13


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Set in place
Called by name
Part of the
Eternal Dance
One, shine
Two, stay the course
Three, Repeat

The sun
Life giver
Warm
Glowing
Companion
Miracle worker
Photosynthesis
Rises every day
Sets every night
A sign of Covenant Love

Set in place
Called by name
Part of the
Eternal Dance
One, shine
Two, stay the course
Three, Repeat

The moon
Night light
Different face
Same place
Tides rise
Tides fall
Celebration starter
Calendar shifter
Constant
A sign of Faithful Love

Set in place
Called by name
Part of the
Eternal Dance
One, shine
Two, stay the course
Three, Repeat

Stars
Millions
upon
Millions
Twinkling
Pictures
Prophecy
Wise men follow
Point the Way
A sign of Unchanging love

Set in place
Called by name
Part of the
Eternal Dance
One, shine
Two, stay the course
Three, Repeat

Jesus
Son
Godís face
Prophet
Priest
King
Sacrifice for men
Lifted high
to Heaven
A sign of Forgiving love

Set in place
Called by name
Part of the
Eternal Dance
One, shine
Two, stay the course
Three, Repeat

Me
A child
Redeemed
Filled by
Holy Spirit
Called to
Shine
Stay the course
Repeat
A sign of Fatherís love


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Camille (C D) Swanson 01/31/13
Just lovely, simply lovely.
God bless~
Sunny Loomis 02/06/13
Very nice job. Thank you.
Loren T. Lowery02/07/13
Serene and beautiful and the last three line of every other stanza...a course of action to be repeated every day. Congratulations on your EC. Well deserved.
Myrna Noyes02/07/13
Hearty congratulations on your E.C. for this beautifully-written piece with its profound message! I, too, want to "shine, stay the course, and repeat" all through my life! Thank you for sharing this with us! WAY TO WRITE!! :)
Margaret Kearley 02/07/13
This has such a lovely rhythm and is a beautiful poem, that spans the ages. Congratulations on your well deserved EC.
Bea Edwards 02/11/13
I really enjoyed your beautiful poem. The third time I read it was even more enjoyable as its lovely cadence danced in my head. Congratulations on your EC placing.