The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/05
This is a truly wonderful entry. I love the way truth prods at the seeker and sits her on a rock. You created a wonderful picture of a tormented lost soul and the moment of salvation. (“Journey,” she asked with wide-eyed wonder? Delete the comma and put the ? after journey.)yeggy
11/08/05
This piece is RICH! Beautiful work. Congratulations!
11/08/05
This piece is poetry to the ears in its slow and rhythmic cadence. It reinforces the story line guiding with the Song Of Life.
11/13/05
Captivating tale! Similar in tone and style to -Hinds Feet on High Places-, and even =Pilgrim's Progress-.