The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/13
Nicely done. I enjoyed how you interlaced your "earth father's" ways with the words and ways of our heavenly Father.

Good job.

God bless~
I really enjoyed this piece. You make some excellent points and it made me stop and think as well.

The only red ink I have to offer is when using the word Dad like a name the D should be capitalized, but if you put a qualifier in front of it like my or the, then it is no longer a proper noun and should not be capitalized.

I really like your beginning. Those five short words speak volumes when coming from an irate parent. This intrigued me and made me eager to keep reading. I think the transition from the real life story to your message was seamless. You did a nice job with this piece.