The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet story. I love it when our kids humble us. As parents it can be easy to forget the little important things that God gives us to recharge our minds and bodies. I could almost smell the strawberry shampoo. You did a nice job on this.
01/25/13
Tender, sweet and well written story.

God bless~
This is really wonderful. I enjoyed having all my senses involved: sound of the wind, warmth of the coffe, etc. One suggestion (you may think is funny): I think you need to write that she sets her coffee cup down. I could feel that she was falling asleep, and kept wanting to catch her coffee cup!
01/28/13
There's a lot of truth in this and you've written it so nicely. Thanks.
Congratulations for ranking 25 overall