The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/13
Wow! This was an incredibly poignant story, my eyes welled up at the end. I didn't know at first what was happening, then I got it very quickly.

Beautifully written, and beautifully told. Excellent job wiht this amazing piece.

God Bless~
I really enjoyed this. Great job.

01/29/13
Creative and moving. There's a bit of a jolt when the narrative changes from addressing the son to the present tense encounter with the man in the cemetery.The character of the father is very well-developed.