The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/13
This was a tender loving story, and shows how God can take care of it all, for everyone and more. Great message.

God bless~
01/27/13
I could feel your pain and life struggle as I read this. Well written and touching story. A few misplaced words but overall well written.
01/29/13
This is a story that many of us can relate to. It would read more smoothly with tweaks in punctuation; in particular, there are many places where commas are needed. You did a good job in creating a very realistic character with realistic difficulties, and the story had a satisfying ending.