The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 294 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
01/25/13
I think this is super sweet and realistic. Though hectic, I could still feel the love in this family. It emanates from my screen much like the glow of the kitchen clock. I thought the little one had been to the doctor and was repeating the common say ahhh. I love the ending. It took me by surprise and since I know nothing about music, it was even more of a delight. I do wonder where the little one heard it from though--they say God works in mysterious ways, even through the voice of a toddler. Delightful read.
01/25/13
I don't have kids, and I still felt myself relating to this poor mother. Very realistic. And I love the ending. I had heard that before - what selah meant - but it had never really sunk in before. I had to rest and take that in. Selah. And I loved that the little toddler kept saying, "Say la." I love how God can whisper to the innocent.
01/25/13
This was a very entertaining read. Nicely done.

God bless~
01/29/13
Well written-- I can so identify! Keep writing.