The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/13
Your title piqued my interest, and the first stanza hooked me right away! What an important message is shared in this excellent poem! The 4th stanza where God is talking is another favorite of mine. His words exuded peace for the soul! Great job! :)
Wow! This style is my favorite type of poetry. I seem to get it more when I read it in a familiar rhyming pattern. Maybe I'm taking comfort from my Dr Seuss days, which seemed like yesterday, but as you point out in your powerful piece, I need to stop pining for days gone by. I feel like God looked into my soul and know the exact words I needed at this exact second and placed them in your talented head. It means a lot to me. you've touched my heart in ways I can never express.
01/25/13
This was great! I loved it, the way it flowed and the message it told.

God bless~
Congratulations for ranking 35 overall