The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/13
This is an awesome story. It took me back to one of the favorite times in my life--working as a maternity nurse. I loved the gentle nature of the MC. You did a fine job.
01/24/13
Such a tender story. In our "look out for number one" generation, it's refreshing to read a story of compassion and genuine concern.

Wing His Words!
01/25/13
Felt as if I was right in the middle of this well written tale.

Nicely done...I enjoyed this.

God bless~
01/26/13
AAAAAWWWWW! This is great. I'm assuming you as the author are one of the characters, and I can't help but wonder who you are? :) Nice job with this.
01/26/13
I love the parent's concern for their children, and the nurse's reassurances that there were others praying for them. Nicely told.
01/27/13
Oh, what a tender, touching story! I could almost feel the poor parents' fatigue and their relief at the end! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this well-written piece!
01/30/13
I enjoyed reading this tender story and was happy at the outcome. I also think you must be the nurse because of your medical terminology. I loved your descriptive 'squirming wrinkled preemies.' I don't think that was written in the text book. HeeHee! Great job!