The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/13
You came through again. Great title and word play!
01/24/13
From start to finish you entertain the reader with your creativity and wit. I especially enjoyed the "sleep around the clock" but your "torso couldn't stretch that much" and the stanza with the spots of "soup and chocolate, but all the rest is gravy." Your title is perfecto! :) Love this!
The title gave a clue of the fun read to follow. Delightful!
01/25/13
Hahahahahahahahahahaha.

I'm still laughing. I read it three times, and will again before logging out.

Nicely done.

God bless~
Ah man I love this this and the best part is I think I understood every pun and play on words--that doesn't happen to me very often. This is a delightful poem. And I will rest my case!
01/26/13
This is great fun to read - the plays on words, the humor. Well done!
Fantastic fun. So many meanings included. Playful, witty, a delightful surprise at every turn.
Congratulations on ranking 15th in level four and 18 overall!