The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/13
Wow - this was a powerful and prolific entry. The honesty and the intensity of this was overwhelming...nicely done.

God Bless~
We live in a culture of thinking what can I 'get.' When we need to focus on what can I 'give.' In giving we receive the greatest reward. Thank you for your honesty.
01/28/13
This makes some very good points, and the earnestness of the writer is quite clear. It reads more like a prose essay than a poem; when I see a free verse format, I expect to see poetic "tools" like imagery, varied syntax, alliteration, and the like...I wonder if it would be more effective in prose format. I hope that the writer finds a church body where he/she feels at home; this is so heartfelt.
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