The Official Writing Challenge
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This is super sweet. I could easily picture each of the kids. I noticed some tiny typos like missing quotation marks. Overall, I think you did a great job with this. I really liked how you explained the light. I had never really thought of it like that. You did a good job.
Absolutely delightful! Took me back to my "Toddlers Class" with twenty two cherubs ages two and three. I wish I had shared your story with them.
Awww. so sweet, I loved and enjoyed this so much.

God bless~
Can't wait 'til chapter two arrives. Good, relaxed, simple presentation of Creation.