The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your poem and its message. I particularly liked the long, short-lined stanza which I think was the best part. Well done.
I love your poem here (we had the exact same idea this week). You've created a fine-tuned exquisite piece very creatively written. I think you've got this exactly right with the message concerning man making a name for himself. I so enjoyed reading this! (and I love that you used the word "ziggurat" too).
This is good. I like it! It moves well and flows and does everything else you want a poem to do. :) I especially enjoyed the last stanza.
I liked this poem very much! I enjoyed the variety with the longer-lined stanzas and the short, precise ones. You had some awesome descriptions, too! Great job! :)
Great job. Loved this piece. Nicely done.
God bless~
Very well written, unique in its variation with beautiful flow.
Loved the change up and then back again. Clever and well written.
Beautifully written, good meter and flow and a great message. Excellent.