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01/18/13
Wonderful poem, wonderful message! That is the trouble with much of the world today, they use and grasp onto everything else but Jesus and His word as their guide and measure of what’s right! I really enjoyed this poem, well done!
01/21/13
I enjoyed the meter you used, making this just flow. I also love the truth presented here, about the Standard (Jesus Christ) that we're measured against. Great work!
01/22/13
Truth and more truth in this beautifully written poem. Amen
God bless~
This is so lovely. It can be interpreted in different ways. For me it was a lesson to not be quite so harsh on myself. I'll never measure up, but by inviting Jesus into my heart, I don't have to worry about it, I just need to follow his directions. This is a beautiful piece.
01/24/13
The meter you've used carries us through some deep, simple and challenging truth. Great job.
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