The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful words.
01/19/13
How wonderful is the depth of this poem. It flows with magnificently descriptive verse amd impressive rhyme and rhythm.

Your talent is showing.:-)
01/19/13
How wonderful is the depth of this poem. It flows with magnificently descriptive verse amd impressive rhyme and rhythm.

Your talent is showing.:-)
01/20/13
Deep and meaningful. Beautifully written and superb for the topic. well done.
01/20/13
This is a beautiful entry. You really made me think deeply on the concept of how deep, wide and high is God's love. The words of this piece seemed to pour over me, leaving a peacefulness in me as they passed.

Great job!
01/20/13
Oh, I like this. I especially loved the second to last stanza, and the one about mountains. :)
01/20/13
Well done. The line that spoke to my heart----"There is no way to ever measure mercy miles He gives with pleasure."
Wow this is incredible poem. You did a fantastic job with the rhythm and the rhymes. Your words reached out and grabbed my heart. The only red ink I have is I noticed you wrote his saves and I think you meant he. Another thing I noticed, and this might just be the way my eyes work, but the shape of the poem almost looks like Jesus hanging on the cross. It gave me chills and left me with no doubt that this was inspired by the Holy Spirit. Beautiful writing.
Wow this is incredible poem. You did a fantastic job with the rhythm and the rhymes. Your words reached out and grabbed my heart. The only red ink I have is I noticed you wrote his saves and I think you meant he. Another thing I noticed, and this might just be the way my eyes work, but the shape of the poem almost looks like Jesus hanging on the cross. It gave me chills and left me with no doubt that this was inspired by the Holy Spirit. Beautiful writing.
01/21/13
You didn't just show or tell of the expanse...you made me feel it in my soul. Loved this poem.
01/21/13
Lovely, inspirational, touching poem! It is very nicely on topic and full of rich imagery and spiritual joy.
01/22/13
Touching and moving piece.
Nicely done. God bless~
01/22/13
Very nice poem that drips with passion. Your word choices tug at the heart, making the message quite palatable and enjoyable.
Wonderfully done. The flow of the message spilling from the heart onto the page. Great job!
01/23/13
Exquisite poem my dear!
Congratulations! Happy Dance!!
01/24/13
Congrats, Lynn!
Congratulations on ranking 18 overall!
01/25/13
Congrats Lynn...for your placement and ranking overall. I'm so happy for you. God bless~