The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/13
What a wonderful story…oh yes, God’s grace is immeasurable and an extra dose seems to always be presented to us, just when we need a little boost of it to “measure up”. Well done!
01/18/13
Well done. It reminded me of the phrase, "If God leads you to it, He will see you through it." He never fails.
01/19/13
I really enjoyed your story which gripped me right to the end. Thanks.
01/22/13
Lovely message along with excellent writing. I enjoyed it immensely.

God bless~
01/23/13
I really enjoyed this. I could feel the suspense building as the story progressed. It kept me engaged right to the last word. I also enjoyed the open ending, it allows the Holy Spirit to work in different ways in different people. Delightful reading!
01/24/13
You had me right there in the bus with Sybilla, which would have been no help to her because I didn't know where she was going. I love how you used the same phrase to produce contrasting reactions in her heart. Well done.