The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful message. You just never know when our words will uplift others.
01/17/13
Powerful, encouraging, sad all mixed into one. Well written.
01/20/13
Heartbreaking----Very well done. My only suggestion would be to separate the paragraphs. Maybe it's just me but I find a double space between paragraphs makes it easier on the eyes. Good job.
Wow this is an awesome story. You did an amazing job of pulling me in right at the beginning. I could feel the pain in the mother and the kind heart of the secretary. You covered the topic in a fresh way. You brought tears to my eyes as I tried and imagine what the pain would feel like. Often people say that the last thing they can do is pray or the least thing they can do is pray. However as you have demonstrated in the story praying should be the first thing one does and what is the most someone can do for another, not the least. Excellent job on this well-written piece.
01/22/13
Wonderful and powerful. Thank you. God bless~