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I enjoyed this poem. You did a wonderful job of showing it's all a matter of perspective and oh how divine the day will be when we see things with new eyes. :)
01/11/13
Those folks who think that the earth is flat haven't yet explained how our satellites can keep travelling in square orbits!
You have kept a reassuring tone in bridging from one outdated belief into one that is timeless. Well done.
01/12/13
Sometimes I do think people look at me as if I just said "the world is flat" when I speak about Jesus. So I bought your poem almost completely. I say almost because you threw people who don't believe in the moon landing into the same group. C'mon! We all know that it took place on a set in Houston! :)

All kidding aside, I enjoyed your entry very much. Good job!
01/12/13
Nicely done! It's all a matter of perspective, isn't it?
01/12/13
My favorite line in "His lost sheep to seek out and find" He found me just before it was to be too late. Thank you for this excellent poem. Great form and rhyme and meter. Loved it.
01/12/13
You've done a super job with this poem. I really enjoyed reading it and I think your title sums up the message that follows very well. Great job.
01/13/13
I loved it- Your title summed up in the last line 'unfurled' was perfect!!
01/13/13
Your poem has a unique perspective, and asks pertinent questions.
01/14/13
Loved the title and the message. The only red ink...

The "He" in the fourth stanza seems unnecessary, and did you mean "If God's a leftover..."

01/15/13
Beautifully said...and masterfully written.

Thank you. God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 9 in Masters and 13 overall!