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01/10/13
How your story brings back memories! Not so funny then, but hilarious now. You have described the growing pains skillfully and with humor and compassion.
01/11/13
This brought back distant memories for me too. It made me smile. My best friend suddenly began to sprout and the growth was unstoppable. I was so envious when she got all the boys attention. Happy days!
01/11/13
Oh I love this story. It took me back to my past. I could feel all the emotions that were churning around in the MC's head. I love your take on the topic as well. It was a delightful read from beginning to end. Though sisters can be mean sometimes I love how you showed the love of the older sister for her probably pesky and irritating younger sister.
01/11/13
I can really relate to the MC. I was very flat while my older sister was very well endowed. I'm glad I don't have to relive that period in my life either.

01/12/13
You've captured the concerns of a twelve year old really well and the things that only us women will know are so very important at that age! Well done.
01/15/13
Oh my heavens! This truly made me reflective as I walked down memory lane, and I know so many who read this will do the same.

This was a creative and fun way of presenting the topic. Thank you.

God bless~
01/18/13
Congratulations on ranking 12 in Masters and 18 overall!