The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked it! Raising four boys, I know the beating walls take. The only sentence that wasn't quite clear to me was the one about the babysitters. "I don't think the babysitters stopped for about..." Stopped what?
I enjoyed your story, told by the flat. It worked well. Well done.
Cute and endearing tale. I enjoyed and appreciated it very much. Thanks.

God bless~
Oh this is a delightful read. I think you handled the topic in a brilliant way, not only did you call the apartment a flat but the MC is flat too! Loved it! Congratulations on ranking 8 in Masters and 11 overall. (So close!)