The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/12
Hahahahaha...being an avid baseball lover I totally enjoyed this piece. The humor and perfect ending was extremely entertaining and so well told.

God bless~
12/16/12
I loved the double meaning in the game. The descriptions of the pitches were so realistic.
12/17/12
LOVE baseball - and this entry. Just excellent. Great descriptions, internalization, EVERYTHING. This one delighted me.
12/20/12
The MC's internal dialogue while
in the midst of an activity requiring a whole lot of concentration was hilarious. The downward progression of his contemplation's in those few short moments was a good lesson for the reader to guard our thoughts.
12/21/12
Even as someone who knows nothing at all about baseball and most of its terminology, I enjoyed your story with the thoughts going through the MC's head as he played the game. It's very well written and you deserve your 'Highly commended'.
12/23/12
Your inner dialog running throughout the game was genius. I especially appreciated the parallels to his marriage. Excellent writing. Congrats on your level award and Editor's Choice award!