The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/12
I enjoyed this well thought out and interesting poem. Nicely done. God bless~
12/16/12
Simple and clear structure, with a positive challenge to wrap it up. Well done.
12/16/12
This is masterfully crafted in message and execution of poetic meter and form. I wanted to choose a favorite line, but there are so many, I couldn't, so I will just say I love all of this. Wow! Super work!
Profound and thought-provoking. I had Lewis Carrol's "Alice, Through the Looking Glass" in mind as I read. Further I wondered how the author of this poem would handle predestination based on the Creator setting us upon our assigned square? Pesky and as free-willed as we are - it is true it is best to play the game as God designed. Thank goodness the Holy Spirit is always here to prompt our next and every move. Wonderful poem!