The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/12
Poetry in prose - such evocative writing and vivid imagery. And, of course, the message. Beautiful.
12/15/12
Sheer poetry laced with beautiful moments in this lovely entry.
God bless~
12/16/12
Very descriptive and absorbing, for its recurring theme and its build-up to your climax. Great work.
12/16/12
I was captivated by your story, phrases, and message, too. Excellent work.
12/18/12
A fascinating story which I assume must be true - it has the ring of truth. Well-written, with the various eras tied together well and with a good message. Thanks.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in Masters and 15 overall!