The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/12
Excellent I enjoyed this so much. Thank you. God bless~
12/11/12
I love the comparison between the lame man and the sparrow. Your meter is exceptional and I love your triumphant message. Excellent!!!
This is really lovely. I especially enjoyed the part about the bird and how you tied it in at the end of the poem. Congratulations for ranking 9 in Masters and 11 overall!