The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/12
This was uplifting and will serve as an inspiration to those who read it. Thanks!
God bless~
12/12/12
Excellent descriptions and emotional pull here - and a well-shared lesson. Will remember this one. Great imagery!
This is an intense piece. You did a grand job of building the characters and the conflict. It prompted a flashback to my son's last high school swim meet. For four years he dreamed of qualifying for states and he was crushed when he missed it by one one hundredth of a second, as his mom I felt the pain as deeply as he did. Your story reminds me that God loves us and feels our pain and failures far more than we can imagine.