The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/12
I really enjoyed this story. You conveyed her excitement and used interesting details. I also like how you wove in an important message, ending it in such a nice way. Excellent.
12/03/12
I enjoyed this piece, and the message that went with it. Humility helps the beauty from the inside shine on the outside.
12/04/12
I really embraced this story from beginning to end. Lovely message and so clever. GOd Bless~
12/05/12
Beautiful story and beautifully written.

God Bless
12/05/12
Beautiful story and beautifully written.

God Bless
The first part of this brought back memories when our daughter was in the Nutcracker - getting all dressed up to go on stage. She eventually grew into the part of Clara, but more importantly, as your story reminds us, she grew into a lovely woman with some wonderful memories. Your story is filled with tender grace.
12/06/12
Love this! I was right there with Kelly as she blossoms - outwardly and inwardly. Nicely done!
12/06/12
Nicely written. He is the beauty in us - a good message!
Congratulations for ranking 13 overall!!