The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/12
Children do ask some of the hardest questions, and your MC did a good job answering them.

I don't know if it is just me, but I was a little confused by the ending of the piece. Again, it could just be that I didn't understand.

Being a children's church teacher, I've had children ask me many difficult questions. You did a great job showing how kids can put a teacher on the spot.
12/04/12
Interesting piece..authentic dialogue. Children are so open and direct and your entry expressed that well.

Nicely done. God bless~