The Official Writing Challenge
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12/04/12
Oooh, your memories brought back many from my own childhood. I kept well away from the dandelions though; it was said that if you picked one you'd wet the bed! I enjoyed reading your detailed and descriptive story.
12/04/12
Great ending! (Pssst - I like dandelions, but I'm not the one who takes care of the lawn.)
12/04/12
Powerful and well done.
Thanks. God bless~
12/06/12
“Slide your thumb and forefinger down from the flower all the way to the stem’s beginning and pinch it off there. A new one will soon bloom in its place. Not only that, they will also multiply!”

Love that. What a wonderful analogy of how God works in our lives. Sometimes we need to pinch something off to bloom anew - and spread that bloom to others!

Nice job!