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11/29/12
An enjoyable, gently-reflective story. I like your descriptions, though a "fell" may need some further embellishment, so non-Yorkshire readers will not associate it with anyone coming a cropper.
A lovely, well-woven story. Your writing seemed very atmospheric in that I could sense the time and place and your characters were ones the reader (this one, anyway) could easily sympathize and believe. Well done.
This is a captivating piece. The sense of mystery drew me in right away and kept me to the very end. Your characters felt real and I felt like I was only a few steps away listening to their banter. Your message is one I often need to be reminded of. Sometimes I worry too much about what is happening right now instead of preparing my soul for the inevitable.
12/04/12
A beautiful uplifting story of the power of faith.
excellent!

God Bless
12/04/12
Brava! Nicely done. This story captivated me from the first sentence to the last word. Thanks. God bless~
12/05/12
Ummm sunflowers are my favorite and they reflect the faith and grace in your story. Beautifully and creative entry.
Congratulations for ranking 14 overall!!
11/14/13
Well, Danni, I'm only 18 months late! Have just read this beautiful touching story and wanted to say thankyou. What a lesson of the view of heaven and eternity. Just lovely. God bless you.