The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/12
Wow! This exquisite writing has an amazing emotional effect on this reader; haunting, playful, ethereal, taking me to your world of shadow. Just the supposition concerning a shadow bloom (I love it). The comparison with the wind and light upon the shadow is stunning. This is pristine poetry cloaked as prose. Amazing word choices here!
11/30/12
The imagery abounding throughout this magnificent entry is stunning--and thought provoking. Great take on the topic!
11/30/12
Such luxuriant word pictures that stir all kinds of reflection, yet with a clarity that shifts a gasp of amazement to a grasp of reassurance. Brilliant work that reflects your closeness to God's creation.
This is a masterpiece of poetic prose--each word building on another in descriptions of nature's beauty and its relation to memory.
Wow this is so deep. I would guess I could read it many times and each reading God would put something new on my heart. It takes a great deal of talent to write something with so many layers that can touch hundreds of people each in a new and different way. There is such power and hope in these words. It definitely gives me many things to think about.
12/02/12
Another amazing almost overwhelming description of something that is usually so predictably dimensional. Stunning piece of work.
12/03/12
a mystical and mesmerizing work of art!
12/03/12
This is great.

I got just a bit lost in the first paragraph, and actually felt this read more as a poem. I almost felt like it needed more line breaks. BUT that is probably just me.

This is awesome. Very well written.
12/04/12
Very descriptive writing. Nice!
12/04/12
Excellent job with this lovely and descriptive piece. I enjoyed it. Thanks!
God bless~
12/05/12
WOW! Again. This is breathtakingly beautiful and moving. I'm totally in awe of your amazing gift. Keep 'em coming.
Congratulations for ranking 20 overall!!